Job's first rebuttal is beautiful... a defence, couched in a lament, whose power lays in its truth in so far as Job believes he is innocent. Despite the state in which his losses and affliction have left him, he gets a little feisty by the end of chapter 6 and into chapter 7.
Just a note: As I will be travelling tomorrow, below is Job's entire first response (Job 6 and 7). It's a bit much for casual reading so take your time...
Job 6 (HNV) or HEB
Job (Iyov) Responds
1 Then Iyov answered,
2 "Oh that my anguish were weighed, And all my calamity laid in the balances!
3 For now it would be heavier than the sand of the seas, Therefore have my words been rash.
4 For the arrows of Shaddai are within me, My spirit drinks up their poison. The terrors of God set themselves in array against me.
5 Does the wild donkey bray when he has grass? Or does the ox low over his fodder?
Reading this again, I noticed that Job is saying a lot here. In verse 3 he points to the reason for his words up to this point, seeming to acknowledge that some of those words may have been rash. It's kind of a conditional repentance: "I wouldn't have spoke thusly but for these infernal boils and the graves of my children stretched out before me."
The other thing he seems to be saying, in v 5, is that although the words Elifaz spoke may have been intended as nourishment (of a spiritual sort), he did not find them as such -- the proof is in his braying. Of course v 5 may also be referring to whatever benefit God may have intended by allowing the enemy to afflict him. Verse 6 rephrases the idea though continues the metaphor of eating and taste so I'm leaning towards him talking about his friend's words more than God's purpose.
6 Can that which has no flavor be eaten without salt? Or is there any taste in the white of an egg?
7 My soul refuses to touch them; They are as loathsome food to me.
Job's suffering is great, and he is finding Elifaz's reasoning most unhelpful if not detestable. Ever been there?
8 "Oh that I might have my request; That God would grant the thing that I long for!
9 Even that it would please God to crush me; That he would let loose his hand, and cut me off!
10 Be it still my consolation, Yes, let me exult in pain that doesn't spare, That I have not denied the words of the Holy One.
This is an idea Job will return to in varying degrees of clarity through the debate. Essentially he is saying, "God can do whatever he wants with me, but I will not abandon his precepts (or curse him)."
11 What is my strength, that I should wait? What is my end, that I should be patient?
12 Is my strength the strength of stones? Or is my flesh of brass?
13 Isn't it that I have no help in me, That wisdom is driven quite from me?
"Why is my death forestalled? I'm just a man after all, with no power of mind or body of my own to endure life such as this." I think Job is saying too that reason is no help in the face of his calamity.
14 "To him who is ready to faint, kindness should be shown from his friend; Even to him who forsakes the fear of Shaddai.
15 My brothers have dealt deceitfully as a brook, As the channel of brooks that pass away;
16 Which are black by reason of the ice, in which the snow hides itself:
17 In the dry season, they vanish. When it is hot, they are consumed out of their place.
I love this description: water frozen (and treacherous) in winter, and vanished when needed to quench thirst. Still Job refers to his friends as brothers here.
18 The caravans that travel beside them turn aside; They go up into the waste, and perish.
19 The caravans of Tema looked, The companies of Sheva waited for them.
20 They were put to shame because they had hoped; They came there, and were confounded.
21 For now you are nothing. You see a terror, and are afraid.
22 Did I say, 'Give to me?' Or, 'Offer a present for me from your substance?'
23 Or, 'Deliver me from the adversary's hand?' Or, 'Redeem me from the hand of the oppressors?'
Nope, not pleased with his friends just now. Job even goes so far as to say, "assuming your advice could do more than 'confound' did I ask for it?"
24 "Teach me, and I will hold my shalom; Cause me to understand wherein I have erred.
25 How forcible are words of uprightness! But your reproof, what does it reprove?
26 Do you intend to reprove words, Seeing that the speeches of one who is desperate are as wind?
27 Yes, you would even cast lots for the fatherless, And make merchandise of your friend.
28 Now therefore be pleased to look at me, For surely I shall not lie to your face.
29 Please return. Let there be no injustice; Yes, return again, my cause is righteous.
30 Is there injustice on my tongue? Can't my taste discern mischievous things?
"I see right through you Elifaz. If you have something useful to say, then say it and I will listen." (Yes I see that Job's way of saying it is far more eloquent.) Job notes here that in his condition, his words are not entirely blameworthy. I wonder if he's referring to his first lament after they all sat in silence for 7 days?
Job 7 (HNV) or HEB
Job's first response (cont'd)
1 "Isn't a man forced to labor on eretz? Aren't his days like the days of a hired hand?
2 As a servant who earnestly desires the shadow, As a hireling who looks for his wages,
3 So am I made to possess months of misery, Wearisome nights are appointed to me.
This is a closer reading of Gen 3:17-19 than Elifaz managed... not that I'm suggesting Genesis was written before Job (honestly I don't know).
4 When I lie down, I say, 'When shall I arise, and the night be gone?' I toss and turn until the dawning of the day.
5 My flesh is clothed with worms and clods of dust. My skin closes up, and breaks out afresh.
6 My days are swifter than a weaver's shuttle, And are spent without hope.
7 Oh remember that my life is a breath. My eye shall no more see good.
8 The eye of him who sees me shall see me no more. Your eyes shall be on me, but I shall not be.
9 As the cloud is consumed and vanishes away, So he who goes down to She'ol shall come up no more.
10 He shall return no more to his house, Neither shall his place know him any more.
"him who sees me" I wonder if this might better be rendered El Roi, God who sees me, the same God Hagar met at the well after she fled Sarai? Sigh, poor Job...
11 "Therefore I will not keep silent. I will speak in the anguish of my spirit. I will complain in the bitterness of my soul.
12 Am I a sea, or a sea-monster, That you put a guard over me?
13 When I say, 'My bed shall comfort me, My couch shall ease my complaint;'
14 Then you scar me with dreams, And terrify me through visions:
15 So that my soul chooses strangling, Death rather than my bones.
16 I loathe my life. I don't want to live forever. Leave me alone; for my days are but a breath.
Here Job is expanding his statements made above, that he knows no peace, even at rest. He longs for death, his life is pain and lacking purpose as far as he can tell. He also asserts his right to object to what has happened to him, even if it is his only consolation.
17 What is man, that you should magnify him, That you should set your mind on him,
18 That you should visit him every morning, And test him every moment?
19 How long will you not look away from me, Nor leave me alone until I swallow down my spittle?
20 If I have sinned, what do I do to you, you watcher of men? Why have you set me as a mark for you, So that I am a burden to myself?
21 Why do you not pardon my disobedience, and take away my iniquity? For now shall I lie down in the dust. You will seek me diligently, but I shall not be."
Job shifts his stance -- just in case? We learned this about him in chpts 1+2. While he will continue to maintain his innocence to his friends, when he is talking directly to God it seems he allows for the fact that he (we) cannot know the mind of God. I don't think he is admitting guilt, just that he really has no idea why things turned sour (to put it mildly) for him. In a way, in direct appeal to God he asks "is there something I've missed?" Regardless, it is not clear that he buys into the idea that he is being punished for something, or that he does not deserve mercy. And, as he said himself in verse 6:13, "I may not be in my right mind just now [please don't hold it against me]."
Hope you are enjoying this as much as I am. Hopefully on Saturday we will meet Job's (Iyov's... I like that better) second friend.
Edit: added observation after Job 6:5.